When
There is grand sun. Dare you to look her in the eye, and cold ever changing moon, pretentious as love outside of a movie theatre screen.
There is no aroma to the rain, petrichor is a lie that belongs to the earth. Wildflowers, seemingly pretty, are really weeds, reality check! You rip them out, they appear like magic rabbits in a hat.
When i'm feeling low, when the coffee is just a bitter dark draught in a mug with a silly drawing of a flower and a bird, and the apple peeled is cut across to reveal a star without a stupid night sky.
words of scripture
hold over my head a halo -
a protective tent
When © gillena cox 2022
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Welcome to Monday WRites # 360
Already today is the last Monday of AUGUST
You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance for eg the rite of afternoon tea).
If you have a Monday post at your blog you can share at the linky. There is no prompt. All that's required is that your post is a Monday post
REVISIT
SHARE A MONDAY POST
...I love all of your tropical greens! Enjoy a fabulous week, Gillena.
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We don't always notice the difference unless we slow down and pay attention. Neat mosaics!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Diane
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Gillena about as good as a haibun can get.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Lili
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Nice green mosaics - it seems to be always summer in Trinidad or Tobago.
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Violetta
Thanks for your appreciation Violetta. Our 2 seasons are Dry Season and Rainy Season.
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Very descriptive and I love that it doesn't romanticise nature. Nice use of language.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Nitin
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Such a unique path to take with the prompt. Love all the whimsical thoughts and descriptions!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Mish
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Nice pictures. I liked the flow of words in your writing. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Kitty
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This is different, Gillena! I especially like the final paragraph and the haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Kim
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I'm sorry you were feeling so low, Gillena. Such fascinating descriptions!
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Thanks for your appreciation Merril
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The haiku is magic. Love the halo. Inspired. Thank you for sharing this, Gillena.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation K
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Beautifully done, Gilleana. And Amen to your haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Dwight
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Well done and the photos add much.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Bill
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I love the haiku in the end. What a good shelter to have.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation BjΓΆrn
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"when the coffee is just a bitter dark draught in a mug with a silly drawing of a flower and a bird"
ReplyDeleteGoodness! I didn't know that was possible! I thought that coffee was always nothing more nor less than the nectar of the gods!
Thinking of you, Gillena!
~David [ben Alexander]
http://skepticskaddish.com/
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Grand greens, Gillena!
ReplyDeleteGillena - love, love, love this selection of leaves. Isn't the variety of God's creation incredible? Thanks for linking to Mosaic Monday!
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