Wednesday, October 27, 2021

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DUODORA - SOME TRUTH

Humbly  humbly

Bow creativity

Curtains rise and fall

Drama takes mid stage

Lies are not fiction

Creativity needs loud applauding

Off with your heads spirits of the untruth


Humbly  humbly

Those grinning skeletons 

 Sorry excuses

Imperfect species

Oh for Suzi's sake!

Take responsibility right the wrongs

Forsooth just sweeten the pot with some truth

© gillena cox 2021

REVISIT


BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH
Challenged to  write A Duodora :
a quatorzain made up of 2 septets.
syllabic,  4/6/5/5/5/10/10 syllables per line.
rhymed Axxxxxb Axxxxxb L1 is repeated as a refrain that begins the 2nd stanza. x is unrhymed.

ENJOY THE MUSIC:  

Link to Sweetest 100 Days of Christmas in T&T HERE HAPPY SEASON
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24 comments:

  1. robkistnerOctober 27, 2021 at 4:28 PM

    I really like this Gillena! Right to the heart of the matter — “…sweeten the pot with some truth”! Well written my friend!

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  2. Gillena CoxOctober 27, 2021 at 5:13 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Rob

    Much💜love

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  3. HelenOctober 27, 2021 at 5:53 PM

    It's all about the truth! A great Duodora!!!

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    1. Gillena CoxOctober 28, 2021 at 12:34 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Helen

      Much💜love

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  4. indybevOctober 27, 2021 at 6:26 PM

    What a great duodora about a subject we need more of ---- TRUTH!

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  5. ms_liliOctober 27, 2021 at 7:51 PM

    Gillena, I love the collage -- with candy corn! -- that you created. Spooky and fun. I also think that truth is such a foundation to build so many things that it is a wonder that anything is still standing. Nicely done and extra candy for the graphic <3

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  6. Gillena CoxOctober 28, 2021 at 12:33 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Lili

    Much💜love

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  7. IngridOctober 28, 2021 at 1:26 AM

    Amen to this, Gillena! We could really use some truth right now ❤️

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    1. Gillena CoxOctober 28, 2021 at 5:11 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Ingrid

      Much💜love

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  8. sean@bogieOctober 28, 2021 at 1:28 AM

    Congratulations on an engaging Halloween Duodora. Tricky challenge e I thought. BTW, who is Suzi?

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  9. Gillena CoxOctober 28, 2021 at 5:13 AM

    😁Suzi is anyone.
    Thank you for your appreciation Sean

    Much💜love

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  10. KerfeOctober 28, 2021 at 7:28 AM

    Good thoughts...if only the world will take them to heart!

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  11. Gillena CoxOctober 28, 2021 at 8:38 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Kerfe

    Much💜love

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  12. GraceOctober 28, 2021 at 12:38 PM

    Love this one specially: Creativity needs loud applauding. Kudos on the collage.

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  13. Gillena CoxOctober 28, 2021 at 1:03 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Grace

    Much💜love

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  14. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comOctober 28, 2021 at 3:38 PM

    Love this cauldron you've created here.....ah yes! Just sweeten it with truth!!!

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    1. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2021 at 5:44 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Lilian

      Much💜love

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  15. JennaOctober 28, 2021 at 8:02 PM

    Good message. I like this!

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    1. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2021 at 5:44 PM

      Thank you for your appreciation Jenna

      Much💜love

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  16. Marion HortonOctober 29, 2021 at 12:30 PM

    What a great message Gillena - 'sweeten the pot with some truth'!

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  17. Gillena CoxOctober 29, 2021 at 5:44 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Marion

    Much💜love

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  18. Sanaa RizviOctober 31, 2021 at 5:44 PM

    "Lies are not fiction,".. yes yes! Powerful write, Gillena 💝💝

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  19. Gillena CoxNovember 3, 2021 at 1:37 PM

    Happy you dropped by Sanaa

    Much💛love

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