OF PAIN LIVING QUESTIONS
Moon of the morning,
Misshapen, how is it
You watch our pain unflinching?
Are you birthing our pain?
Lingering there? Moon of the morning.
Fixed is your stare.
Is it dare? or are you warning
Us to come out seek the light?
For life, is indeed of living;
In joy, or of its retreat,
Still to shine, Moon of the morning.
OF PAIN LIVING QUESTIONS © gillena cox 2018
Revisit
3 May 2017
...to mask the pain...
3 May 2015
Bits of Inspiration ~ Frida Kahlo
Prompted by Susie Clevenger. Challenged - For today's challenge choose a quote, a photo, one of Frida's art pieces as inspiration or like Frida, choose yourself to paint with words
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I love the image of the moon birthing our pain, Gillena.
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Well she certainly didn't build a wall around her suffering she used it as the basis for her art, if you can't beat it, join it use it and so she did beautifully.
ReplyDeleteYes indeed; she certainly did Robin her brilliance shines for all to see
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This is wonderfully pensive. I strongly believe the full moon influences our mood..💞
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So much to learn from nature, who happily bears pain and sufferings inflicted upon....
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Yes, I love what you did with this one!
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It's hard to know the answer from the face of an unflinching moon. But we do hope it's a call to come out to the light ...and live. A lovely write!
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I love this poem to the morning moon. She is my favourite moon!
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This is beautiful..What creative imagery to use the moon as birthing our pain. Thank you so much for taking part in the prompt!
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wonderfully written Gilena
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And what did the Moon reply?
ReplyDeleteI really love that image of Frida at the top with the quote.
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I love the thought of the moon birthing our pain.
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indeed, moon as silent witness or birth mother, especially at dawn,
ReplyDeletea bold start to this poem Gillena, and yet it is still filled with hope ... and perhaps, that in itself, answers the question itself ...
I like how you've handled this - definitely a fresh take/direction, one unexpected for using Kahlo as a point of inspiration.
Thank you for your appreciation Willow
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There is something so evocative of tying it all to the moon... somehow you can tie it so much pain, the lunacy and menstrual cycles... You widened her suffering for me.
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