a bawling mouth, they met
it was the very first time
she held a baby in her arms
here was a miracle
cradled in a smell of newness
suckling sweetly
© gillena cox 2017
A Glance at Narrative
Karin shared some of her art and asked us to choose one and write a narrative, I chose the image above and wrote a Cherita - Malay word for “story” or “tale”.
Such a sweet capture, Gillena!❤️
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Absolutely delightful Gillena.
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A life-changing "first" indeed.
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Ah, so very sweet. Really one of my favorites of yours, and so great with the drawing--thanks! k.
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What a remarkable sweet poem.
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So nice, Gillena, short bur so very sweet, yet correct. You've been there?
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Delightful
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This made me grin. Such sweetness here.
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Such a wonderful moment, captured.
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What a perfect response to this evocative drawing! It is not so much that either one illustrates the other, as that – regardless of the fact that they can stand separately – together they make a whole beautiful work of art.
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Oh my goodness.... love.
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