EINSTEIN WANDERS INTO WORD LAND
This poem is science
Awaiting proof of being
Having no idea what similes be
Until the smiles of readers
Beaming light of nodding heads
Warrants readability
This poem is light
Particles bouncing off syllables
Shape-shifting into phonetics
Pronouncing itself words
This poem is alien
To thoughts of readers
Who ponder meanings
Fill spaces with wonder
And ascribe nuances of experiences
This poem is experiment
Beam me up metaphorical escapades
EINSTEIN WANDERS INTO WORD LAND © gillena cox 2017
Physics with BjΓΆrn: Particle-wave dualism and the photoelectric effect
CHALLENGE: BjΓΆrn has asked us to write using the shape shifting nature of nature on microscopic level for a poem.
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30 April 2015
I just love the way you approached this theme, Gillena. The poem has a great rhythm too.
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Ahh this poem is such a breath of fresh air... Gillena...❤️❤️
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Sanaa
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Delightfully dancy rhythm Gillena.
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a good experiment, too ~
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That's a great title, Gillena! I really enjoyed the lines:
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Particles bouncing off syllables
Shape-shifting into phonetics
Pronouncing itself words'.
Thanks for your appreciation Kim
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Ahhh, love this! Especially that little Star Trek nod at the end. Wonderful, Gillena :)
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A real delight. Love where you took us.
ReplyDeleteThanks Martin
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This poem is delectable, delightful, intricate and intriguing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Rosemary
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Thanks for all the poems! Readers on the Lilly pad make it worth the writing π
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Oh I love this!! This is science I can understand.
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Nice smile generator, Gillena. I especially like the lines, "To thoughts of readers Who ponder meanings ". This will depend upon the time of day, the humidity, and on how much both the writer and the reader had been drinking. :)
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I love the simile smile.. a de-light to read.
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oh this is wonderful...loved the poem!
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