tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post9222567241598380623..comments2024-03-28T11:14:34.941-04:00Comments on VERSES: 548Gillena Coxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-21015749023475610862018-05-09T10:35:43.609-04:002018-05-09T10:35:43.609-04:00I like the use of questions here and the thought o...I like the use of questions here and the thought of colors curving and bridging..Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-73598475946239591052018-05-08T18:03:26.090-04:002018-05-08T18:03:26.090-04:00Thank you for your appreciation Sara
Much🌼loveThank you for your appreciation Sara<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-11002512897051752872018-05-06T14:29:40.472-04:002018-05-06T14:29:40.472-04:00So potent, Gillena. Love the use of yellow, and t...So potent, Gillena. Love the use of yellow, and the hopeful rainbow ending.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-88115317186288857632018-04-29T00:30:58.707-04:002018-04-29T00:30:58.707-04:00Thanks for dropping by Candy
Much🌼loveThanks for dropping by Candy<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-66438614728365487102018-04-28T22:53:48.616-04:002018-04-28T22:53:48.616-04:00your words truly complimented the artyour words truly complimented the artAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-5474866699487306712018-04-28T19:27:45.140-04:002018-04-28T19:27:45.140-04:00Thank you for your appreciation Willow
Much🌼love...Thank you for your appreciation Willow<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-11385500346640245832018-04-28T19:26:50.650-04:002018-04-28T19:26:50.650-04:00Thank you for your appreciation Vivian
Much🌼love...Thank you for your appreciation Vivian<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-45030279981148147872018-04-28T18:35:35.250-04:002018-04-28T18:35:35.250-04:00I love the opening lines - they are so curious for...I love the opening lines - they are so curious for their power - and the taste of yellow - yes, many associate with hope - but oh, in some moments, I would really like to be someone who has Synesthesia - although, I did slip into a 3 day zone once, and literally became the colour yellow. Really. Sounds odd. But honestly, not crazy. <br /><br />Anyhow, I really like how you've painted and triumphed with the rainbow - arching over, reaching its fingers beyond - to offer hope, lifting brightness to the despair. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-252321972989250892018-04-28T16:47:20.486-04:002018-04-28T16:47:20.486-04:00Such vivid imagery...you folded taste and aromas i...Such vivid imagery...you folded taste and aromas into this poem. Lovely!Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-24365400768419538902018-04-28T13:15:55.423-04:002018-04-28T13:15:55.423-04:00Thank you for your sppreciation Kim
Much🌼loveThank you for your sppreciation Kim<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-40476627448584889982018-04-28T11:41:46.322-04:002018-04-28T11:41:46.322-04:00I like the idea of yellow as a taste, Gillena, and...I like the idea of yellow as a taste, Gillena, and the way your poem begins with 'sweet aromas of tomorrow' and daffodils, and then veers into overcasts and wretched despair, a massacre with 'Gut, joints, blood, bones, dust, and tears'.<br />I think I prefer the arch of colour, too!Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-6637830022973377902018-04-28T10:59:58.373-04:002018-04-28T10:59:58.373-04:00Thank you for dropping by Annell
Much🌼loveThank you for dropping by Annell<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-7247839379938302972018-04-28T10:23:38.541-04:002018-04-28T10:23:38.541-04:00I love your arch of color!I love your arch of color!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-15879723056536284092018-04-28T09:54:13.560-04:002018-04-28T09:54:13.560-04:00Thank you for your appreciation Björn. And i used ...Thank you for your appreciation Björn. And i used Yellow as the colour for Hope<br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-54486693132951464862018-04-28T09:47:52.919-04:002018-04-28T09:47:52.919-04:00Love the way you painted this with color... bless ...Love the way you painted this with color... bless the colors instead of the grey.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-32430701622853295962018-04-28T09:34:31.093-04:002018-04-28T09:34:31.093-04:00Thank you for your appreciation Paul
Much🌼loveThank you for your appreciation Paul<br /><br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-59450833425590802202018-04-28T09:33:12.631-04:002018-04-28T09:33:12.631-04:00The repetitive phrase end at 1.5.and 11. are impor...The repetitive phrase end at 1.5.and 11. are important Rosemary<br /><br />Thanks for dropping by <br /><br />Much🌼loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-77158092433564299322018-04-28T08:50:25.456-04:002018-04-28T08:50:25.456-04:00Powerful imagery. Love will always find her way.Powerful imagery. Love will always find her way.Paul John Dearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08976172444697072142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-91016345774127833382018-04-28T08:43:25.329-04:002018-04-28T08:43:25.329-04:00The adjective "RAW" comes to mind. I esp...The adjective "RAW" comes to mind. I especially relate to the lines<br />"Into scenarios, macabre enough to holler,<br />Enough! of horror from gadgets loathsome." Yes, enough,,,Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-78009285903134291652018-04-28T08:41:55.102-04:002018-04-28T08:41:55.102-04:00You've used words in very original, unexpected...You've used words in very original, unexpected ways, to create vivid images and a powerful message.<br /><br />(I thought the 5th line had to be identical with the first. Never mind, I'm happy with the way my poem turned out by doing that.)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-63642083145866837892018-04-28T07:30:18.016-04:002018-04-28T07:30:18.016-04:00Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa
much love.....Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-50443946211369531052018-04-28T06:57:29.112-04:002018-04-28T06:57:29.112-04:00My goodness this is so powerful, Gillena! Especial...My goodness this is so powerful, Gillena! Especially like; "If i bridged raindrops into arch of colour,would deep overcasts, shoot innocence into wretched despair?"Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.com