tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post782678933899905180..comments2024-03-29T01:46:51.036-04:00Comments on VERSES: 319Gillena Coxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-48197514396722202502016-11-23T23:24:04.517-04:002016-11-23T23:24:04.517-04:00Thanks for dropping by Sreeja
Much love... Thanks for dropping by Sreeja<br /><br />Much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-66359756731626408802016-11-23T11:59:50.138-04:002016-11-23T11:59:50.138-04:00 very intense...from the writing I can feel the he... very intense...from the writing I can feel the heat...great!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-37521719649689813632016-11-21T15:59:28.805-04:002016-11-21T15:59:28.805-04:00The words swirl like gowns at a masquerade ball, b...The words swirl like gowns at a masquerade ball, but the pain is evident throughout.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-49735174232252711542016-11-20T20:59:29.065-04:002016-11-20T20:59:29.065-04:00Thanks for dropping in Magaly
much love...Thanks for dropping in Magaly<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-50255458399467962822016-11-20T20:58:50.783-04:002016-11-20T20:58:50.783-04:00Happy you dropped in Khaya
much love...Happy you dropped in Khaya<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-30948623400145267222016-11-20T20:56:22.522-04:002016-11-20T20:56:22.522-04:00Thanks for your appreciation Jae
much love...Thanks for your appreciation Jae<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-21127992669599965062016-11-20T20:54:38.209-04:002016-11-20T20:54:38.209-04:00💕 thanks for dropping in to read mine Sanaa 💕
m...💕 thanks for dropping in to read mine Sanaa 💕<br /><br />much love...<br />Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-73428236920708734092016-11-20T06:25:52.258-04:002016-11-20T06:25:52.258-04:00There is a wonderful rhythm in this - like a song ...There is a wonderful rhythm in this - like a song sung to carry the self on despite the pain underneath.. a wonderful poem Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-76822282830312700862016-11-20T05:39:11.682-04:002016-11-20T05:39:11.682-04:00Oh, I agree. Betrayal, more especially by people w...Oh, I agree. Betrayal, more especially by people we trust, sends us scurrying for our masks. An acute and beautifully penned piece, Gillena.Khaya Ronkainenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06286352495379234651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-641832923550209982016-11-19T15:10:22.053-04:002016-11-19T15:10:22.053-04:00Betrayal rips at the soul... especially when it co...Betrayal rips at the soul... especially when it comes from a face that smiled at us first. Such pain.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-58360591016444282042016-11-19T13:48:04.446-04:002016-11-19T13:48:04.446-04:00Oh Gillena, this is beautifully tender and emotive...Oh Gillena, this is beautifully tender and emotive 💕💕I can relate to the pain and the anguish in this poem. We have all at some point in our lives been betrayed by the people whom we never could have imagined would be capable of the task. Especially love the lines; " With jaws agape enough to rips to shreds. Hope of belonging in faith of journeying, hidden in the hurt that smothers living" Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support 💕💕<br /><br /><br />Lots of love,<br />Sanaa<br />Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-45523150902142871272016-11-19T00:59:48.291-04:002016-11-19T00:59:48.291-04:00Thanks for your appreciation Jim
Much love... Thanks for your appreciation Jim <br /><br />Much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-21319297074791983052016-11-18T22:20:03.286-04:002016-11-18T22:20:03.286-04:00"A smile to mask the pain of betrayal" B..."A smile to mask the pain of betrayal" Been there, done that, didn't help but preserved my dignity. Deep emotion in this poemDebi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-87334022384706129372016-11-18T20:17:56.138-04:002016-11-18T20:17:56.138-04:00How deep and full of pain this poem is Gillena as ...How deep and full of pain this poem is Gillena as the masquerade of love is revealed through betrayal drowning all hopes of reconciliation. How well you expressed it.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.com