tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post2471734146549546136..comments2024-03-29T01:46:51.036-04:00Comments on VERSES: 28Gillena Coxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-51660896117587804762019-02-25T07:56:28.035-04:002019-02-25T07:56:28.035-04:00Posted to the Facebook Group 'Seize The Poem&#...Posted to the Facebook Group 'Seize The Poem' 25th February 2019Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-50994123977461448732015-03-01T06:05:59.426-04:302015-03-01T06:05:59.426-04:30thank you for your appreciation Anita
much love.....thank you for your appreciation Anita<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-29272701299023273342015-03-01T06:02:25.259-04:302015-03-01T06:02:25.259-04:30thanks for dropping in Jess
much love...thanks for dropping in Jess<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-84375633567047037062015-03-01T04:49:09.762-04:302015-03-01T04:49:09.762-04:30Very interesting.
So many points here! Micro, Macr...Very interesting.<br />So many points here! Micro, Macro - everything together thanks to God & His life prana :)Anita Sabathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13365472694082398017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-17460499369301951622015-02-28T21:29:34.234-04:302015-02-28T21:29:34.234-04:30Beautiful poem! I like your technique of repetitio...Beautiful poem! I like your technique of repetition. (from Jess, masterselftherapy.com)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-51830215607176606662015-02-28T06:59:30.215-04:302015-02-28T06:59:30.215-04:30(◕‿◕。) ah; Mary Ann, Thanks for being such a good ...(◕‿◕。) ah; Mary Ann, Thanks for being such a good sport <br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-39611347114876728112015-02-27T21:01:31.937-04:302015-02-27T21:01:31.937-04:30I loved the almost hypnotic structure of this --- ...I loved the almost hypnotic structure of this --- somehow both meditative and dramatic at the same time.<br /><br />Let me try an additional few lines at your invitation:<br /><br />inside outside<br />all around-side<br />word gift heart sense<br /><br /><br />Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-62563598593411115272015-02-26T11:22:00.637-04:302015-02-26T11:22:00.637-04:30thank you for your appreciation Gail
much love......thank you for your appreciation Gail<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-6072872413152131512015-02-26T11:21:32.481-04:302015-02-26T11:21:32.481-04:30thanks for your appreciation Sumana
much love...thanks for your appreciation Sumana<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-53071864188132463902015-02-26T08:44:34.869-04:302015-02-26T08:44:34.869-04:30difference/sameness is an importance message.difference/sameness is an importance message.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-398424084925422562015-02-25T23:09:03.451-04:302015-02-25T23:09:03.451-04:30ah from an atom to the cosmos you have included ev...ah from an atom to the cosmos you have included everything in words...a great take on the prompt....inside / outside indeed and what a lovely rhythm to it....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-32473709239455231822015-02-25T20:55:15.711-04:302015-02-25T20:55:15.711-04:30thanks Rose
much love...thanks Rose<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-20493098367683187512015-02-25T20:54:51.969-04:302015-02-25T20:54:51.969-04:30thanks Gabriella
much love...thanks Gabriella<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-69632493039410910422015-02-25T18:44:17.824-04:302015-02-25T18:44:17.824-04:30Deliciously mesmerizing use of linguistics :)Deliciously mesmerizing use of linguistics :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14028993309576383058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-83987948954606680172015-02-25T16:49:59.801-04:302015-02-25T16:49:59.801-04:30I like the way you use repetitions in your poem, G...I like the way you use repetitions in your poem, Gillena.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-77634670071658243762015-02-25T14:58:47.754-04:302015-02-25T14:58:47.754-04:30Thanks Mary
much love...Thanks Mary<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-72600138303626958952015-02-25T14:58:24.446-04:302015-02-25T14:58:24.446-04:30happy you dropped in Alan
much love...happy you dropped in Alan<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-4847182685226787212015-02-25T14:58:03.747-04:302015-02-25T14:58:03.747-04:30thank you for your appreciation Peggy
much love.....thank you for your appreciation Peggy<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-55444774342675152602015-02-25T14:57:30.055-04:302015-02-25T14:57:30.055-04:30happy you dropped in Daneshwari
much love...happy you dropped in Daneshwari<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-64464071505075270812015-02-25T14:56:52.772-04:302015-02-25T14:56:52.772-04:30thanks for your appreciation Brian
much love...thanks for your appreciation Brian<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-64094099996979569912015-02-25T14:44:45.349-04:302015-02-25T14:44:45.349-04:30You have really worked with inside/outside in a un...You have really worked with inside/outside in a unique way.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-75906409668459758202015-02-25T14:09:33.687-04:302015-02-25T14:09:33.687-04:30Love this, Just one line changes everything, excel...Love this, Just one line changes everything, excellentalan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-72956942770172195582015-02-25T13:33:52.463-04:302015-02-25T13:33:52.463-04:30I like the form of this with the only changes bein...I like the form of this with the only changes being in the final lines. I can almost hear this as a song or chant. So many things inside and outside. Thanks for posting.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-91121036857648990032015-02-25T12:36:29.505-04:302015-02-25T12:36:29.505-04:30Nice! :)Nice! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04689040871487149826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891841371715485708.post-59367230558224301312015-02-25T12:36:20.272-04:302015-02-25T12:36:20.272-04:30it is interesting how changing just that one line ...it is interesting how changing just that one line in each allows you to turn this gem a bit and explore all the facets....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com