Tuesday, July 21, 2026

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[Rupert Brooke: War Poet courtesy dVerse Poets Pub]

 Without  Fantasies,

These i have loved:

The quiet dark anticipating dawn,

Unfolding in layers of whistles and songs of sky birds,

Dare of the tropical mockingbird that skips across my wall,

The shadows of banana leaves in upcoming light,

Without the fantasies,

They are just banana fronds dancing with the wind,

Radiant raindrops couching in cool flowers;

And flowers themselves, that sway through sunny hours,

Dreaming of moths that drink them under the moon

The stark white of plumerias against this background of clearing  new day,

The coolness envelops my backyard,

Where a chair lay tumbled,

Maybe from a sprinting cat or maybe a strong gust,

Ah! day breaks:

 The cloud palette is yellow, misty yellow.

All these have been my loves.

© gillena cox 2026

Note: The bold lines are from the second stanza of ‘The Great Lover’ by Rupert Brooke


Blog Hopping Today With

--read lines from the second stanza of ‘The Great Lover’ and then springboard off one or more to write a list poem that begins with ‘These I have loved’, details things that the speaker of the poem has loved and ends with ‘All these have been my loves’.

16 comments:

  1. This is lovely, Gillena, and I love that you included some lines from the Brookes poem. I especially love the opening lines, and that you’ve included your beloved plumerias.

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  2. Thank you for your appreciation, Kim

    Much love

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  3. Another wonderful poem, Gillena!! I love how this poem captures the quiet awakening of the world at dawn. The images of birds, flowers, rain, and the humble fallen chair create a sense of wonder in the everyday, reminding us how much beauty surrounds us when we take the time to notice.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation, Cara

      Much love

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  4. 🙂 thanks for your appreciation, Lynn

    Much love

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  5. A great list of wonderful joys in your life!

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation, Dwight

      Much love

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation, Jay

      Much love

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  7. Such a lovely list of little joys worthy of love in this life.

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  8. Thank you for your appreciation, Ca Reelika

    Much love

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  9. Love all those things from your tropical paradise

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  10. Thank you for your appreciation, Björn

    Much love

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  11. Love the notes of longing in this piece…

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  12. Thank you for your appreciation, Paula

    Much love

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