OF APPLES EATEN
Back then i was flesh of his flesh, and bone of his bones, so when he handed me that delicious, ripe, juicy apple, I bit into it, sinking my teeth into our despised future; whence i came to love him and hate him, yet was never complete without him.
Anger blazed in the fire of God's wrath, for him and me; we had eaten, and the naked truth was, we should not have; so helpless, were we, we tried to hide the taste of apple, camouflaged in fig leaves.
Who can hide from God? of course he saw us there cringing in our sorry disobedience, and being God, he clothed us in warmth of skins; a miracle we thought.
That was how we came to know the word clothes; of course, later in generations to come, synonyms like: design and fashion came into being.
OF APPLES EATEN © gillena cox 2018
REVISIT
13 April 2015
13 April 2017
Apple 2016
April 13 – 13 Is Poetry
Prompted by Magaly; Challenge: Today, I wish to read poems full of metaphors used to tell tales as mind-tickling as Sylvia’s bag of ambiguously green fruit. Choose 3 to 13 (nonconsecutive) words out of Setterfield’s quote[given] use them in a poem that is a deliberate celebration of metaphor
Ha! Loved the ending.
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That ending is bang on brilliant!💜
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yes the ending is funny
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An interesting telling of this tale. Am thankful someone invented clothing, lol.
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That's how it all started :-) I especially like the line
ReplyDelete"I bit into it, sinking my teeth into our despised future;" and I smiled when I read the last lines :-)
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A clever twist on the old tale.
ReplyDeleteOh, and I note in your version he offered the apple to her!
Delete😊thank you for your appreciation Rosemary. Aint he the perfect host!!!😊
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I knew it! The snake found a way to make some money, lol!
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I am all good with the invention of clothing. It gets cold here in the Philly 'burbs!
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Wonderful! I love the ending on this.
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I loved and enjoyed your last lines.
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design and fashion are the devil's doing!
ReplyDeletehaha this is great
who can hide from god indeed
love it
ps. your font is peerless
😊thank you for your appreciation Dan. Glad you like the font
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Like it, Gillena. Of course you know, it was supposed to be 'SHE handed' the apple. At least my Book says that. Haha.
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😊thank you for your appreciation Jim
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