Monday, July 26, 2021

Monday WRites 308


We are at The Olympics: Go Team TTO

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You've heard about the Monday Blues well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance for eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Welcome to Monday WRites #308: A Happy Monday to all. Be Safe.

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BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH

Mosaic Monday: #140: Lost for Words

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REFLECTION
She stops to drink, 
Her animal tongue  lapping the sweetness
Of  clear running water, 
Thirsty after a lively tryst with her sibling cubs,

She knows nothing of reflection, 

Sated, she stops,  
peering into the likeness, 
Stream of consciousness 
weaves a tale of a sibling.
© gillena cox 2021


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38 comments:

  1. ...Gillena, thanks for hosting and I hope that your week is off to a great start.

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  2. Thanks for dropping by Tom

    Much💜love

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  3. Thanks for dropping by Linda

    Much💜love

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  4. Consciousness seems to be the favored stream out here on the poetic trail. I have wondered how animals regard a reflection. But I'm still struggling with the notion that most of them do not perceive reality in color.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Glenn

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  5. Enjoy your team at the Olympics!! :)

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  6. You've given us something to think about! Nicely written!

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  7. I really like the ideas you wove into your quadrille.

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  8. Thanks for your appreciation Lili

    Much💜love

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  9. Love this, and I'm especially struck by:
    "She knows nothing of reflection"

    I often wish I knew nothing of reflection as far as mirrors go, and was free to just go about my business without so much thought to self. Oh, to just enjoy the forward momentum of that stream...

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  10. Thanks for your appreciation De

    Much💜love

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  11. Beautiful! I love the mother seeing her cubs in the her own reflection in the stream!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

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  12. She knows nothing of reflection,
    Sated, she stops,
    peering into the likeness

    It is true Gillena! It takes an unrelated event to bring one back to reality following a quarrel. Wonderful write, Ma'am!

    Hank

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  13. This is incredibly potent, I can truly visualize the scene as she stops to peer into the likeness. Beautifully composed, Gillena 💝💝

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

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  14. Nicely done poem. I like your take on the prompt.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Arcadia

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  15. I have decided you definitely "are' a poet Gillenna. ))) I have not been following the Olympics at all, but I hope your country does well.

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  16. Good luck to Team TTO, Gillena. Like Sallie, I have not been watching the Olympics, yet. Thanks for linking to Mosaic Monday!

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  17. Happy you dropped by Angie

    Much💜love

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  18. Beautiful image of an animal drinking from the stream: I picture a baby deer ❤️ and good luck in the Olympics!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Ingrid

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  19. Well, I certainly enjoyed that poem. Well done.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Bill

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  20. I will carry the concept of animals looking at their reflections in streams with me a bit ... had never considered that they did. Cheers, Gillena.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Helen

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  21. Such a lovely image of lapping at the stream!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Morgan

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  22. I'm sorry. We had no electricity and therefore now my late comment here...

    ...thank you for sharing, I enjoyed reading, Gillena.

    Happy MosaicMonday

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  23. Happy you dropped by Heidrun

    Much💜love

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  24. I sometimes wonder what animals think. Their intelligence is different from ours.

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  25. Thanks for your appreciation Linda

    Much💜love

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