Wednesday, October 26, 2016

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NEUTRAL GREY
Suddenly they take to the air
pigeons of grey
with a stutter
with a flutter

Not flashy like friend kiskadee
they like to be
more like friend dove
the boon of love

The don their somber coats to bear
neutral wear
archetypal
acoustical

NEUTRAL GREY © gillena cox 2016


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Mid week motif~ Neutrality / Objectivity

20 comments:

  1. I'll nver be able to wear my neutral grey again--which I do often--without thinking of pigeons in sudden noisy (but peaceful) archetypal flight!

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    1. Happy you dropped in to read mine Susan, thanks for your appreciation

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  2. "The don their somber coats to bear neutral wear, archetypal, acoustical" sigh.. that's so profound an image 💖


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  3. The trouble with pigeons they are always dropping in on us. I am sure Kiskadees are the prettier and more useful bird.

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    1. The Kiskadees are pettier, louder and shriller. happy you dropped in Robin

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  4. Flashy is often the way to be In the end the neutral dove is were the wisdom comes in
    I love your last lines They are beautiful

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Marja

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  6. I am with Susan. I don't think I am cut out to wear neutral grey!
    Love the way you expressed your ideas.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Mary

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  7. Not flashy like friend kiskadee
    they like to be

    Being flashy can mean a position of strength to counter the somber grey!

    Hank

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  8. Thanks for your appreciation Hank

    Much love...

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  9. I like your take on the very difficult prompt--and I like pigeons too!

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  10. I like neutral grey - I often wear it :-)
    Nice one, Gillena.

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    1. Thanks for dropping in Nicholas

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