PICTURES OF CONFETTI
Under the tree there is a pink carpet
Spread; did some one say cherry petal?
Not the answer to fit that colour
Pomerac flowers? yes
Rolling with the wind, in the rhythm of
The wind, bracts, purple's the hue;
Grey concrete pavement holds, the
Sound of footsteps
The centers of white plumerias
Are, filled with the sun's radiance;
They fall, tumble lightly, speckling
The grass, pretty as can be
He left, for she beckons, that Jezebel!
With breasts to suckle displacement;
Children need their father you know,
They make good horseys, hands and knees
On the floor
Ah yes white, is the colour of the rose you
Dunked in the dark waters of your selfish
Blood curdling bowl Jezebel! Remember?
There's no colour to state heartlessness
There's no colour to paint a young wife
In grief, thinner than her petite size,
Sized to un-sexy
Oh but that was long ago, before the
introduction of wild strawberry, tumbleweed
And razzmatazz, pretty names for colours
That always existed
Guess what? some colours, are just mightier
Than the sword
© gillena cox 2015
Fireblossom Friday Picture This
The challenge: to complete the title given part of, and then to write a new poem to go with it "Pictures of _________"
Some names of colors are so much better than reality of beige.. Maybe it's all in a name?
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Bjorn
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Loved the closing lines..! Excellent poem :D
ReplyDeleteLiking your colored confetti today, Gillena. My favorite is white in as paper sack, ready to explode!!! Action in the bag. Love, (◕‿◕)
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Happy you dropped in Jim (◕‿◕)
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I love this. Especially this line: "With breasts to suckle displacement"
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed all the colorful descriptions. Well done!
thanks for your appreciation Sage
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~ your color-infused poem is enchanting (like confetti falling softly.)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Helen
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"There's no colour to state heartlessness". Good one!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Sherry
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There's no colour to state heartlessness
ReplyDeleteThere's no colour to paint a young wife
In grief, thinner than her petite size,
Sized to un-sexy.... that is so good.
Thanks for your appreciation George
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You tell SUCH a vivid story here...I agree with Debi...the stanza above is SO good :-)
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They make good horses! And it's true, what a great line. What else i liked was the notion of colors that have always existed being given flashy new names for the same thing that has always been.
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oh and i have to change the spelling to horseys; get my drift (◕‿◕。)
DeleteA new name to the same old color doesn't make it brighter...love your colorplay
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Susie
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This poem certainly does a flip flop - the middle is just so sad - at least the way I read it. But, perhaps, they are better off without him... ?
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Margaret
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brilliant close ~
ReplyDeletethank you grapeling
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Wow! This is mind blowing, Gillena. Excellent. I love the way you connected the colours to the faithlessness of the marriage. Well done my friend.
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